The publisher's initial editorial review for Sugar Milk.
On the subject matter:
The first page introduces an "everyman," and the first chapter establishes [Ron] as someone to whom readers can relate. His voice is clear, sardonic, truthful, and humorous.
The theme is interesting and although it could be simplified into one man’s version of making lemonade out of lemons, [Ron] takes care to ensure he will be recognizable to a variety of readers, whether or not they have had any experiences similar to his.
On the writing:
[Ron] has a strong but thoughtful voice and he invigorates his dialogue with storytelling flair…
The content is informative, funny, and winning... [Ron] has a clever and broad capacity with language…
…[he] is careful to provide enough clues so that readers can get a solid perception of the characters and their environment, yet still allow enough room for imaginations to wander.
Overall comments:
[Ron] masks pain with humor but recognizes that sharing his emotions can be a useful method for easing that pain. This will likely endear him to a wide range of readers, anxious to witness how one person has dealt with the pain that so many are experiencing these days.
This story paints a sympathetic picture of a man who has seen the highest highs and lowest lows. That [Ron] is willing to share it all speaks to his bravery and humility. Readers are likely to recognize a familiar voice and find that as they proceed through the story they are laughing through their own tears. The lessons learned are thoughtful and the author is able to present maturity with childlike mischievousness.
Readers will likely identify with [Ron] and his ups and downs. The many stories that make up this book are unified by the idea that everyone must make a decision on how he or she wants to proceed with their life, and [Ron] captures that idea from the start.
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